I am learning to add some detail to my writing.
Lollipop the Whale
One
afternoon in the deep blue sea lived a lonely big blue whale called Lollipop.
He had no friends. He searched and searched but he couldn’t find anyone to play
with. He saw a tail that was a fish that was called Dory. He wanted to be the
whale’s friend.
I like adding detail to my writing. It is fun thinking about where and when the story happened. I also like thinking of adjectives to put in my writing.
